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Langiola 26 November 2018

Ni sa bula vinaka Room 10. My name is Langiola from St Pius X. I

really like your rap it was fabulous.

You were right about eating fruit and vegetables. It was fantastic.

My comment is a quality comment because I have been specific.
I was being positive. I Used power words like fantastic and
fabulous.

60th jubliee

                                                         60th jubilee day

On Sunday we went to our school church to have the 60th Jubilee Mass. When we were
sang in church. After church we went to our cultural group to change in the classroom
we got changed. after we went outside then we got in the hall. Sonny was talking to
us a little bit.

Finally the Room 7’s went on the stage dancing. Then the Maori group went up on the
stage. After that the boy’s were doing a haka. After the haka the Samoan group went
on the stage. After that Joseph was dancing. After that the Cook Island group went on
stage. After the Cook Island group the Tongan group went on the stage and danced.

After the Tongan group the Fijian group went on the stage and danced. Then we did
a worship dance. After that a boy was singing to us. Finally we got changed then
went home.

Basketball writing

Basketball writing

Every Tuesday we go basketball we always wait for the room 7 to go to there
classroom then we go when they gone. Then we slept in 2 group.
went to them we were play a game Called jump layer. After playing jump layer we played a game called golden child. Then we get a ball so we can bounce the ball then when they get the ball in we stop then the other person goes. When very we make we have to keep on bouncing the ball. Then the bell rang then we keep on playing. Then we need to put our hands on top. Then we said basketball then we went to line up.

Happy Fathers Day

     Happy Fathers Day

                          

On Sunday it was Father's Day. We woke up and got to the kitchen
and ate toast. After eating we went to watch scary movies.
After we played basketball outside. Then my dad told us to get inside.
after my dad said do you want to get Mcdonalds then we said yes I
had Fanta drink, Big Mac and Fries. then we ate it all. After eating
my brothers they buyed lollies and drinks. We drank some. after
we went to sleep I woke up and saw my cousin on the netbook
then we told him to come sleep.

Cousins Birthday

              My Cousin’s Birthday

On Saturday

it was my cousin's birthday when we were at the living room

watching the movie with sponge bob square pants with my cousins
and cat then we all watch scary stuff on my brother’s

netbook

then we all went to sleep  for a little bit. Then my mum came back

from

the McDonald and from the cheesecake shop. Then we started the

birthday then my aunt came from Dunkin Donuts. Then we

started again. Then my dad prayed then we closed our eyes then we
were done

with praying. Then we got our doughnuts and Mcdonalds and went
to

the living room and eat. When we were done eating we all had a
balloon each,

then we played balloon fight then we went to sleep.

   

         

Matariki day

         Exciting Matariki Day

On Wednesday we all lined up outside to go Te Oro. We had to take off our shoes inside.

When we got inside a girl was singing a Maori song. We split in 3 groups painting, drawing, weaving and
carving.

Then we started to draw our patterns then after  that we drew our patterns we painted our patterns.
When we started we need water so we can change colors.

When we finished we made a dance and it was a Maori dance. When we finished dancing we all went to
the mat to share our learning.

When the girl was talking then she finished talking she asks us to come up and share our learning.

Then after when we finished sharing  our learning then the other groups came up and do there learning.
After that we made the dance.

After the dance we all hugged every maori person. Then we all lined up. After that we all walked back to
school.